Wednesday, February 3, 2016

Elevator Pitch No. 1

Service Industry Union
Week 5

My opportunity is to provide service industry employees with representation for fair wages and benefits as well as representation for being fired/released without a valid reason

My solution is to form a Union for service employees.


7 comments:

  1. Hey Dallin,
    Your elevator pitch was detailed yet perfectly concise. I like how you tied in college kids to your video and it really sounded like a tv commercial for a professional law firm or political representative! I wish you the best if you truly plan on submitting a petition. As you said, I'm a well-educated college student and I wasn't even aware this opportunity existed. Check out my post here: http://intro2ent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-1.html

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  2. Hello Dallin,

    I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. Your opportunity is very interesting. I like how you are geared toward college students and I think starting a union for those service industries employees will definitely impact the lives of many people. Your pitch was clear and well stated.

    Please check out my post at: http://prosper95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html

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  3. Hey Dallin,
    Very good job doing your elevator pitch. I applaud you as many student, me included, missed this assignment. I think you have a great idea starting a unioon to help give service employees a voice and representation. You seem to have a good grasp of your target audience as well. You understand that many students are primarily working in service jobs and targeting these students will get more support for your idea. Unforunately, as I said before, I was unable to make my elevator pitch post last week. I fyou would like to still check out some of my other posts the link to my blog is below.

    https://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?blogID=6048917165151934803#allposts

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  4. Hey Dallin,
    Good job on your elevator speech and your petition, it seems like a great idea for everyone that work in the service industry because I myself being a college student working in the food/service industry see one on one how we are overworked, have insane amount of hours, and above all under payed. I myself would consider to be a part of this union, and I'm sure a couple of my coworkers would agree.

    Hey Quinn,

    Awesome pitch! It was short but to the point and your facts that you stated kept me intrigued as an audience to keep on listening. This is a good idea as well, I actually believe I have commented on your blog before, but it's great to see how far your business idea had evolved.

    Check out my blog sometime.
    http://xyzelayax.blogspot.com/?zx=e03b41289a16422d

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